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"I'm Jasmine and I'm going to tell you about Australia!" It's wonderful,Beautiful and interesting. Australia is a hot dry place but it is still a great place. I'm an Australian and I can tell you the food is wonderful.

Our traditional foods are:
Lamingtons, pavlova, vegemite sandwites, Anzac Biscuts and we like to cook sausages on the barbecue! We have Anzac biscuts because Australians were killed oin the war.

The sports we do are:
swimming, football, soccor, basketball, baseball, running, cricket and tennis. Some people like to play the sport and some like to watch it. All the sports here makes you fit. I like swimming because it is fun and keeps you fit. In the water I like to play Marco Polo. I love to swim breaststroke.

The animals we have are:
Koalas, kangaroos, wombats, emus, dingos and kookaburras. All of these animals are australian and you can see them at the zoo. You can see kangaroos at the golf course. I have seen a kangaroo with it's husband and child.

We have special days:
Anzac Day, Christmas, Birthdays, New Years Days, New Years Eve and Easter. We have special days like Christmas Because it is when christ is born and we give presents to people because it is the time for giving. Santa comes too. We have birthdays because we celebrate when we born.

So you see our Australian culture is interesting, wonderful and beautiful. Now aliens please don't destroy Australia because of our foods, sports and celebrations make up Australia. Australia is an interesting place and it has lots of nice people that are interesting. If you destroy Australia all of it's wonderful things will be gone forever.

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"I'm Jasmine and I'm going to tell you about Australia!" It's wonderful,Beautiful and interesting. I'm an Australian and I can tell you the food is wonderful.

Our traditional foods are:
Lamingtons, pavlova, vegemite sandwites, Anzac Biscuts and we like to cook sausages on the barbecue! We have Anzac biscuts because Australians were killed oin the war.

The sports we do are:
swimming, football, soccor, basketball, baseball, running, cricket and tennis. Some people like to play the sport and some like to watch it. All the sports here makes you fit.

We have special days:
Anzac Day, Christmas, Birthdays, New Years Days, New Years Eve and Easter. We have special days like Christmas Because it is when christ is born and we give presents to people because it is the time for giving. Santa comes too. We have birthdays because we celebrate when we born.

So you see our Australian culture is interesting, wonderful and beautiful. Now aliens please don't destroy Australia because of our foods, sports and celebrations.Australia is an interesting place.


Hi Jasmine.I'm Jessica. I hear you that Australia is a wonderful and beautiful place because of the sports you can play. I hear that Christmas was a special day.I like how you put the sports and the food in. I wondered wHy you don't add what can you ride there. I have a question about the special day? I was looking for an example of sport at your school because I thought that every one swims in your school. My favorite was about the birthdat.