Final draft

1001 TALES
Please do not destroy Australia,it is an interesting place filled with interesting people. We have a well
known place called Ayers Rock. Ayers Rock is a huge rock in the center of the Australian outback.

We have a great range of birds like the astonishing feathers on a Rainbow lorikeet,and the beautiful laugh of the kookaburra.

We have great culture such as Abariginies. Who lived long ago and still live now.
These people belived in Spirits and Gods.
They paint the spirits on the cave walls.These pictures were to teach lesons to their kids.

We also have wonderful wild life,such as Kangaroo's , Koalas and much more.

We have extremely beautiful plants like the great colours on the Kangaroopaw and Gum trees are every were in Australia and are also home to most Koalas .

Australians love to play and watch A.F.L short for Australian Foot ball League.This is not soccer kind of foot ball, its like gridiron but not as rough we also enjoy tennis, cricket, and rugby.

We like to have barbecues on special occasions and mostly for fun.

So please do not destroy Australia,because it is filled with beautiful plants, great sports, amazing animals and much much more


First draft
Please do not destroy Australia,it is an interesting place filled with interesting people. We have a well
known place called Ayers Rock.

We have a great range of birds like the astonishing feathers on a Rainbow lorikeet,and the beautiful laugh of the kookaburra.

We also have wonderful wild life,such as Kangaroo's , Koalas and much more.

We have extremely beautiful plants like the great colours on the Kangaroopaw and Gum trees are every were in Australia and are also home to most Koalas .

Australians love to play and watch A.F.L short for Australian Foot ball League.This is not soccer kind of foot ball, its like gridiron but not as rough we also enjoy tennis, cricket, and rugby.

We like to have barbecues on special occasions and mostly for fun.

So please do not destroy Australia,because it is filled with beautiful plants, great sports, amazing animals and much much more

1. Hi Euan this is Tomeisha and I heard a song about a Kookaburra in a gum tree. It was just called Kookaburra though. I wondered about what part of Australia is Ayers Rock in? I also like having barbecues in the summer and for fun. I think you need to check your punctuation marks and spelling. I already put in your commas Bye!

2. Hi Euan this is Tomeisha again and thanks for the comment. All I did to find a title for this story was by looking at ideas that Mr.Smith came up with. The title I was going to call my story was THE DARK SIDED HAMSTER but I came up with a different title. Bye!