Final Draft
Being captured was not good. We were going back their planet.“Foollish earthlings! your race is not what we hoped for so we shall shoot your country with our laser" said Gazork the alien leader."But dont you see,Australia is the best country in the world" . ''huh''said the aliens.Austraila is a great place to live in.The aliens were stunned.Our is Food great and yummy and we have our own traditional food.Barbeques are a fine aussie thing and great desserts such as pavlova.There's also bangers and mash which are very nice and yummy.Chips are very nice too and have unique flavours. Also Austraila has diffrent people from other countries of the the world including China, America , Italy, Canda,france,Scotland and Aborigainals.The Aboriganals have been have the first ever people on Austraila and have lived here for a thousand years.Our sport is great too.Most people dont really like to play so they watch instead.There's
Football,Tennis,Basketball,Chairball,Swimming and Rugby.The holidays here are Christmas,Easter and Austraila day and lots more.We celbrate Christmas by decorating a tree and giving each presents. Easter has eggs made out of a lollie called Choclate and Austraila day with barbeques,aussie stuff and FIREWORKS! So don't you see! Austraila is a beautiful,intelligent country! ''you are right'' said Zork (second in alien command) ''We shall not destroy your country,we shall make it better! .So we got drove back to see the aliens
destroy a smoke factory.THE END

FIRST DRAFT
being captured was not good. We were going back their planet.“foollish earthlings! your race is not what we hoped so we shall shoot your country with our laser at your country” said Gazork the alien leader.But dont you see,Australia is the best country in the world . ''huh''said the aleins.Austraila is a great place to live in.The aliens were stunned.Our is great and yummy and we have our own traditional food.Barbeques are a fine aussie thing and great desserts such as pavlova.There's also bangers and mash which are very nice and yummy.Chips arevery nice too and have new flavours. Also Austraila has diffrent people from other countries of the the world including China, America , Italy, Canda,france,Scotland and Aborigainals.The Aboriganals have been have the first ever people on Austraila and have lived here for a thousand years.Our sport is great too.Most people dont really like to play so they watch instead.There's
Football,Tennis,Basketball,Chairball,Swimming and Rugby.The holidays here are Christmas,Easter and Austrasila day and lots more.We celbrate Christmas by decoratting a tree and giving each presents. Easter has eggs made out of a lollie called Choclate and Austraila day with barbeques,aussie stuff and FIREWORKS! So don't you see! Austraila is a beautiful,intelligent country! ''you are right'' said Zork (second in command) ''We shall not destroy your country,we shall make it better! .So we got drove back to see the aliens
destroy a smoke factory.THE END