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Hi I am an Australian please don't destroy our beautiful interesting country.First I tell you about the food.


Lot's of Australians like to eat vegemite sandwiches they are very tasty.And barbecues , we
even got great cake like pavlove and lamingtons.
They're all great foods to eat in Australia.

Now I will tell you about animals we have lots of animal like Kangeroos,Kaloas.These are some great Animals.

Now I will tell you about birds.Some are Black Swans, Kockabarras, Rainbow lorikeets,Emus.

Next l'll you about sport we have lot's of different sports in the world.Same sports are played in the
sand, grass, tennis court, gravel and much more. Some sports are cricket, soccer, golf, football,
swimming, volley ball and also one of the best is running to stay healthy and fit.These are some great sports.

Last I'll tell you about the celebrations. Celebrations are fun because you can catch up with family and friends. Some celebrations are Birthdays, Christmas, Easter, Mothers and Fathers Day. We have great celebrations.

So don't destroy Australia because its the best country in the world because of our food,sports,celebrations,birds and animals.

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I'm an Australian please don't destroy our beautiful interesting country.Can I tell you about ou
culture.First I'll tell you about food.

Lot's of Australians like to eat vegemite sandwiches the are very tasty.And barbecues , we
even got great cake like pavlove and lamingtons.They're all great stuff to eat in Australia.


Next l'll you about sport we have lot's of different sports in the world.Same sports are played in the
sand, grass, tennis court, gravel and much much more. Some sports are cricket, soccer, golf, football,
swimming, volley ball and also one of the best is running to stay healthy and fit.

Last I'll tell you about the celebrations. Celebrations are fun becauseyou can catch up with family and friends. Some celebrations are Birthdays, Christmas, Easter, Mother and Father Day. We have great celebrations.

So don't destroy Australia because it the best country in the world because of our food,sports and celebrations.



Hi Courtney. I am Cheyenne. I read your story and I liked it. I am from Mr. Smith's class in Hannibal. I heard that you had vegemite sandwiches. Could you explain what they are. I liked how you told about most of the sports that there are in Australia. Australia has a lot of the same holidays that Hannibal has. I had a question about why you think that Australia is the best country. I was looking for an example of what Australia looked like and what kind of animals are there. I noticed that one of your sentence were not complete. In the 3rd paragraph when you said" to stay healthy a fit." Could you fix that sentence. I really like your story.