final draft 27/3/08
Please don`t destroy Australia it is filled with celebrations like Easter, the day you were born, Anzac day, Australia day and much more. Anzac day reminds us about the people who died in the war fighting for Australia. Australia day is when families go with friends and have fun.
We have lots of sports tennis, grass hockey, ice hockey, AFL which stands for Australia football league , Volley ball and much more. Lots of people like to watch sports and some people to play too.
I'm not finished yet concerts, barbecues, dances, lots of shopping and going to the beach is the perfect thig to do in the summer.
Now you see aliens Australia is a Wonderful place but I did not tell you about the animals did I. Koalas, Emus, Kangaroos, Kookuburras, Wallabies and lots more aussie animals that you will only find in Australia.
I`m done now I hope you see that Australia is a great place to celebrate with friends. We have sports that make us fit. The animals bounce and run and the Kookuburra has a beautiful laugh also the Rainbow lorikeet with its great beautiful feathers. Now I think you see Australia is great so please don't destroy Australia.




Please don`t destroy Australia it is filled with celebrations like Easter, the day you were born, Anzac day, Australia day and much more. Thats when families go with friends and have fun. We have lots of sports tennis,grass hockey, ice hockey.AFL which stamds for Australia football league , Volly ball and much more. Lots of people like to watch sports and some pople to play too. Im not finished yet conserts,barbecues,dances,lots of shopping going to the beach is the perfect thig to do in the summer.Now you see aliens Australia is is a Wondeful place but i did not tell you about the animals did i. Koala,Emu,Kangaroos,Kookuburra,Wallabys and lots more aussie animals. I`m done now i hope you see that australia is a great place we celebrate with friends. We have sports that make us fit. The animals bounce run and the Kookuburra has a beautiful laugh also the Rainbow lorikeey with its great beautiful feathers. Now I think you see Australia is great place



I heard that there is lots of different sports and animals in Australia.I liked how at the end you rementioned what you wrote in the beginning. What is Anzac Day? I wondered what you are doing in your class.I wondered if you ever lived anywhere else.