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1OO1 Tales

Australia is a wonderful place full of nature.Australia has heaps of people from different countrys.Australia has it's own foods like lamington,barbaques,pavlova and kangaroo meat. Australia is mainly desert but some of it is land and the two city's i've been to are Brisbane and Perth.You have to fly in a plane to get from one city to the other. Australian people like sport and like to watch them such as Lacross,Hockey and Cricket.These are 3 sports that need sticks. Hockey is my favorite sport because I like my friends. We do picnics and camp because it's fun. Some of the Australian animals are Kookaburra,Kookaburras laugh like no other animal I will do the song " kookaburra sits in the old gum tree merry merry king of the bush is he laugh kookaburra laugh kookaburra gay . Some other animals are the Kangaroo ,the Kangaroo is a Marsupial that can fit only one joey in the pouch at a time. The last animal i'm going to tell you about is the Koala, the Koala is an animal that live on trees but can come down, they are NOT a type of bear. Tasmania is another part of Australia and its capital city is Hobart.There are many different celebrations in Australia Birthdays which you celebrate the day you were born and Australia Day is when we watch the fireworks,Easter is when you celebrate the day Jesus was spirit rose and we celebrate Christmas for when Jesus was born and we get presents from Santa. Now that you know everything about Australia you won't destroy us.I HOPE.


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1OO1 Tales

Australia is a wonderful place full of nature.Australia has heaps of people from different countrys.Australia has it's own foods like lamington,barbaques,pavlova and kangaroo meat. Australia is mainly desert but some of it is land and the two city's i've been to are Brisbane and Perth.You have to fly in a plane to get from one city to the other. Australian people like sport and like to watch them such as Lacross,Hockey and Cricket.These are 3 sports that need sticks. Hockey is my favorite sport because I like my friends. We do picnics and camp because it's fun. Some of the Australian animals are Kookaburra,Kookaburras laugh like no other animal. some other animals are the Kangaroo ,the Kangaroo is a Marsupial that can fit onl one joey in the pouch at a time. the last animal im going to tell you about is the Koala, the Koala is an animal that live on trees but can come down, they are NOT a typ of bear. Tasmania is another part of Australia and its capital city is Hobart.There are many different celebrations in Australia Birthdays which you celebrate the day you were born and Australia Day is when we watch the fireworks,Easter is when you celebrate the day Jesus was died and came back to life in three days and we celebrate Christmas for when Jesus was born and we get presents from Santa. Now that you know everything about Australia you won't destroy us.I HOPE


Hi Callan my name is Kalin You need to check some of your spelling. I was wondering what does Lacross mean? I like how at the beginning of your story you put a lot of details such as how many people are in Australia and some of the foods you eat. I Like how you made your words come out of the page. You could go back because you have some run on sentences. I heard Kookaburra there is a song to it..