Final Draft
I am an Australin and it is a beautiful place but you do not see it because at night everything and everyone is asleep . In the morning everything and everyone is awake.

Look it's morning everything and everyone has woken up. Azacday all the birds are up just let me go plus you can live here too with all your alien friends. I will give you ten homes for you and your alien friends to live.

So the alien put me down and said you better give all of us a home.

People play sport like running and swimming and lots of diffrent things
What we do sometimes do is barbecue. They cook beef ham chiken on there.

In Austraila we celebrate Christmas, Easter,Birthdays and Anzacday.

We celebrate all thoes things because lets say Anzacday the people that had a war tride to save our contry.
Anzacday stands for Austrailan and New Zealand Army Corps.

We celebrate Easter and Christmas, Birthdays because children love choclate at easter.For christmas and Birthdays children love getting presents.

Aliens please don't destroy Australia see those thing are fun and interesting.


First Draft
I am an Australin and it is a beautiful place but you do not see it because at night everything and everyone is asleep . In the morning everything and everyone is awake.

Look it's morning everything and everyone has waken up and and all the birdsare up just let me go plus you can live here too with all your alien friends too .

So the alien put me down and said you better give all of us a house.

People play sport like running and swimming and lots of diffrent things
What we do sometimes do is barbecue. They cook beef ham chiken on there

In Austraila we celebrate Christmas, Easter,Birthdays and Anzacday.

We celebrate all thoes things because lets say Anzacday the people that had a war tride to save our contry.

We celebrate Easter and Christmas, Birthdays because children love choclate at easter.For christmas and Birthdays children love getting presents.

Aliens please don't destroy Australia see those thing are fun and interesting



Hi Cagla I am Jordon I heard about Anzacday. What is Anzacday ? I had a question why did you put 2 ands in your third sentence? I was looking for an example what kind of house you want from the aliens?
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