Final Draft
I am an Australian . Please Don't destroy Australia . Australia is a great place . You get to see fireworks .

Theres great food . On Christmas its great . Christmas you get pressents and gifts . Look at the buildings everybody has built . They made a real effort to build . Flying Doctors fly to get people who are along way away from Hospitals there great .

Kangaroos,Birds,Cats and Dogs all fantastic animals Birds,Cats and Dogs are great pets .

Sports one of the best things Football,Soccer,Hocky,Rugby,Golf,Teaball,Swimming,Basketball and Ice Skating heaps of sports and they are all fun. People like to play and watch them .

We have lots of beautiful plants and trees and everybody likes barbeques . It's an Australian thing .

Australia is a great place and it will not be destroyed.



First Draft.
1001 Tales I am an Australian . Please Don't destroy Australia . Australia is a great place . You get to see fireworks .

Theres great food . On Christmas its great . Christmas you get pressents and gifts . Look at the buildings everybody has built . They made a real effort to build . Flying Docters fly to get people who are alomg way away from Hospitals there great .

Kangaroos,Birds,Cats and Dogs all fantastic animals Birds,Cats and Dogs are great pets .

Sports one of the best things Football,Soccer,Hocky,Rugby,Golf,Teaball,Swimming,Basketball and Ice Skating heaps of sports and all fun. People like to play and watch them .

We have lots of beautiful plants and trees and every body likes barbecues . It's an Australian thing .

Australia is a great place and it will not be destroyed.



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