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Please don't destroy Australia aliens because it's a wonderful place and I am going to tell you about it,

They'res also smart man made things like sports, books, houses, clocks and if no one invented your space ship you wuold not be here right now. Threre are lots of different sports like football, basketball,and stuff. Books are fun to read,houses are good to live in because when it rains you will get wet .Clocks are good to tell the time. The schools is interesting because if we didn't have schools we wuoldn't know much at all. Buildings are interesting because we wuoldn't have anywhere to work. There are good things in cities so we can have fun. plaines,cars,and boats are for travelling and if we didn't have animals and we woundn't have pets. Our city is really big with lots of people. There is lots of shops and buildings. The city has lots of streets and it is really busy. Australia is a hot dry place but it is cool in winter.



I hope I have convinced you not to destroy earth because see Australia is a wonderfull place.



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1OO1 Tales
Please don't destroy Australia aliens because it's a wonderful place and I am going to tell you about it,

They'res also smart man made things like sports, books, houses, clocks and if no one invented your space ship you wuold not be here right now. Threre are lots of different sports like football, basketball,and stuff. Books are fun to read,houses are good to live in because when it rains you will get wet .Clocks are good to tell the time. The schools is interesting because if we didn't have schools we wuoldn't know much at all. Buildings are interesting because we wuoldn't have anywhere to work. There are good things in cities so we can have fun. plaines,cars,and boats are for travelling and if we didn't have animals and we woundn't have pets.



I hope I have conuinst you not to destrot earth because see Australia is a wonderfull place.



Hi Ben this is your friend Dee. I heard it is very interesting there in Australia. I like the beginning where you put "Please don't destroy Australia aliens. I wounder how it's like in Australia .I had a question about your time there in Australia , if it is 10:42 here what time is it there? . I was look for an example of what your city looks like in Australia.